Friday, November 16, 2012

New Roads Lead to New Places


Natnael Aklile
Word Count: 294 words
                                                                                                                                         

            Jumping off the bus on a warm May Friday afternoon, I was ready for my week to be over. Knowing what Friday meant, I quickly jogged back to my house only thinking of the entertainment that awaited me. As I entered my house, threw my book bag on the floor and entered the kitchen. I could hear my dad talking in Amharic on the phone. My mother was gathering her purse as they prepared to go to a bible study that they attend every week at my uncle’s. “I’m going to play basketball at the Korean Church courts and then I’m going to Brian’ house”, I said as I began going up the stairs. My mother, clearly used to my Friday routine, only acknowledged with a slight head nod. My father came up the stairs to get his bible and as he passed my bedroom, casually and seemingly not too hopeful in his tone, suggested I come with them for the first time. Now being in 7th grade, my Friday afternoon routine had been consistent for years. Go to the courts to play basketball and then hang out at my neighbor’s house with a movie, video games and other friends. I thought to myself, I’ve been waiting for this afternoon all week (as I usually do), do I really want to give up my favorite part of the week? After understanding that I would have another Friday in a week, I decided to go with it. When we arrived, my family went around the rooms giving our greetings. I went into the basement hesitant, where I met two cousins that happened to live in our area. Now, because of that Friday afternoon, I have two older cousins that I confide in and talk to regularly.


The Point: Exiting your comfort zone and trying new things, even if it seems bleak and uninviting, will always be a positive experience due to the first hand learning of why that concept or thing is either right or wrong for you.

2 comments:

  1. You did a good job showing your point of view and goes nice sequentially. I know this is just a blog, but I would suggest breaking up the essay into paragraphs to show change of ideas that will help for when you put visuals to the story in the final project

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  2. Breaking up the essay will allow for it to read smoothly. Nice job, very well written.

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